Painting a commission adventurer with blazing torch

The first blue cloak looks epic but I think it's too dark. This random commission proved a perfect test subject.

Painting 

Prime Grey Seer. Paint the Contrast basecoats.

As soon as I started highlighting the single layer of Ultramarines Blue, I already saw the fault. The Contrast basecoat was patchy. Two layers are needed.

Deeper shadows and lighter highlights still don't solve the issue.

Then paint up to:

• dark leather boots and quiver
• metallic sword
• eyes
• Light leather belt
• Cold white fletching
• Medium skintone
• Dark wood
• Dirty red cloth

Basing

Woodland base. 

Finished!